Translating Poetry into Chinese

Hi Everyone, I wanted to share with you my latest project: translating my English poetry into Chinese! It's been a real challenge, and I was wondering if you any of you artistic, Chinese-speakers could evaluate and give me some feedback. Here is one poem:
家 庭 主 婦 她只是个家庭主妇， 完美无缺地做些杂务。 我在半夜里 悄悄潜行到客厅里

看她沉眠於沙发。 孤单地躺在那儿， 我想送她回她 所属之处，但无从着手。

她只是个家庭主妇 是我l怜悯的如同其他可怜的家庭主妇： 她们的存在被遗忘，她们 耗损着日子去让別人悠闲。

我惯常轻视家庭主妇， 尤其是当我回来 发现她在睏盹， 漫遊于她自己躬身擦地的梦境。

我走了多年後， 回来因为她 一尘不染安全舒适的住处， 她的言语有如雋永智高的先知：

她絮叨着叫我如何做人...Read more

My Poetry Website

Hi everyone! It's been a while since I posted anything, but just wanted to let you know that I just completed my poetry website: http://josephsilver.com/I'd be really flattered if you checked it out and let me know what you think!

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