Skyward - Day 10 - 2008 May 6

I haven't touched the scrīpt in a few days because I don't want to go on a writing binge just yet. I think it's best I brainstorm a little before diving into it.

First of all I need to move the camp fire scene. Ed's idea is that we do the fight between me and Chelsea at a camp fire, so we might as well combine the original camp fire scene with the fight scene, except now we'll have it later on at Tussen's. Jamie and Tussen will go to sleep, and Clay goes out to the fire. Devon wakes up in the middle of the night (or can't sleep) and sees the fire burning from his window, and sees Clay's silhouette. Maybe Clay's drunk now.

Now Devon can go out there and Clay gets pissed. Maybe Clay gives him a drink before laying into him. Then they can have a brotherly moment of getting drunk and stupid, I dunno, or Devon can talk about how he fought Ronnie.

The following day begins with the swimming hole or something like it, they shoot across the lake, have some fun, Tussen kills a pig, they eat it at night, and then bed time. During this day we'll have Terry hunting for them and beating up Kelly, and at night we'll have Gibson and crew questioning Kelly. Morning comes and then everything's gravy.

Thanks Ed. Good call on that one. I'm gonna clean, eat, and try to write at least half of that tonight.