Bartholemew Braveheart

Here is a new character of mine that you'll be seeing more of... I have plans for him. His name is Bartholemew Braveheart. I'm not a professional character designer, so I'd love to know what you all think! And yes, I am aware that his helmet is a bit too small and the grey streaks look bad...

Here's the initial sketch of him that I did during our weekly status meeting (at Plexipixel). I started without any sketch or real plan and wasn't happy with this version, which is why I kept working on it and came up with the top version. Thanks to Ian for encouraging me to do more with the idea behind this character!